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Title: In the Woods #4 (part 77 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: fight / all dialog
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"I'm not giving up."

"What do you call it then?"

"Being realistic. I can't be married to someone I'm frightened of."

"But what about being married to someone you love?"

"That's ideal."

"And you love me, so..."

"I am scared of you. What else is there? I cannot be married to someone I'm afraid of."

"You haven't always been afraid of me."

"Yet you ruined that. I am now."

"Over one fight?"

"It wasn't just a fight, Severus, and you know it."

"What else was it?"

"You physically hurt me; you also invaded my mind. Severus, you invaded my mind!"

Title: In the Woods #5 (part 78 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: fight / all dialog
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"Only because I care."

"No, because you couldn't stand not knowing. You have so many secrets, but I’m not allowed to have one. It wasn't even a secret; it was a nightmare!"

"Calm down."

"Excuse me? You invaded my mind."

"Hermione, it's only because I care."

"Repeat that until you believe it yourself then."

"I do believe it. I know it's true. I didn't do it for any other reason, but to help you because I care."

"No. You did it to find out my secrets. Why couldn't you just leave it alone?"

"It killed me knowing you were hurting."

Title: In the Woods #6 (part 79 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: fight / all dialog
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"No, what was killing you was not knowing."

"You married me-"

"Yes I did. Brilliant observation."

"Hermione... You married me so you must believe I love you."

"Well... Damn it, Severus, of course, I believed you loved me then."

"Loved?"

"Yes, I wouldn't have married you otherwise. And I certainly do love you; however, don't excuse your actions."

"My actions?"

"Your invasion in my mind and you hurting me, of course."

"I didn't ask to excuse them."

"Oh?"

"No, I asked, because I didn't mean to hurt you."

"It sure as hell felt like you meant to hurt me."

Title: In the Woods #7 (part 80 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: fight / all dialog
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"Hermione, I'm sorry."

"You said that already."

"Don't walk away."

"Why not?"

"Don't walk away from me, please."

"Why not? Why can't you just leave me alone?"

"Leaving you alone won't help any."

"Sure it will."

"Your anger won't fade until you have yelled at me."

"What?"

"Hermione, I know you. I know you quite well. Your anger won't fade until you’ve yelled at me and have said your piece. So do so: yell at me."

"You're giving me permission to yell at you?"

"Yes. Unleash your anger, it's the only way you can get over it."

"Get over it?!"

Title: In the Woods #8 (part 81 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: fight / all dialog
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"How can you say get over it? I can't just get over it! You invaded my mind! You physically hurt me! You scare me! I tried to ignore it, but I can't. You've changed."

"Could it be you just refused to see me for who I was?"

"Severus, I didn't marry a man who could hurt me."

"Hermione, can't anyone resort to physical violence?"

"Well, yes, I suppose."

"What makes the man you married different?"

"It doesn't."

"I didn't mean to hurt you… Back away, I won't chase you."

"You won't chase me?"

"As long as you stay here, no."

Title: In the Woods #9 (part 82 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: fight
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"Just when I thought you couldn't get more possessive," Hermione muttered.

"That's not fair," Severus replied quickly. His voice softened. "Hermione, we need to talk this through."

"Since when are you into talking?" she asked icily.

"When my wife is about to leave me."

"Go away, Severus," she whispered her request. Tears welled up in her eyes and she turned away so he wouldn't see them.

"Don't cry," he comforted, trying to pull her close.

"Don't touch me." She jerked away.

"Hermione, I love you. Please tell me you believe that."

"It doesn't matter."

"Then why are you crying?"

Title: In the Woods #10 (part 83 of 'Unchained Melodies')
Words: 100
Challenge: nightmare / fight
Rating: PG
Characers/Pairings: Snape/Hermione
Warnings: teacher/student
Author's Notes: Comments make me happy.

"I'm not," she denied as she wiped her eyes.

"Hermione..." He took a few steps toward her.

Without farther conversation, Hermione ran deeper into the woods.

When she finally stopped, she was surprised that Severus hadn't followed her. She also found she was a little hurt. He had told her he would chase her, but he hadn't. She was surprised at her own desire for him to go after her.

Shaking her head, she pushed away from the tree.

Suddenly an overwhelming sense of familiarity washed over her when she realized that she was in the same clearing as her nightmare.

Date: 2006-07-03 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] droxy.livejournal.com
ut oh....

Date: 2006-07-03 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queenp71.livejournal.com
um...this doesn't look good...dammit...and I thought she was starting to calm down...

Date: 2006-07-03 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rarity.livejournal.com
Lol. Her calm down? Not yet. ;)

Date: 2006-07-03 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queenp71.livejournal.com
well, when her thoughts turned to why he hadn't followed, I had hoped that she was beginning to calm...

Date: 2006-07-03 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rarity.livejournal.com
true, true. Love is a powerful thing. Wanting someone to love you enough to go after you is also a very powerful thing.

at least to me.

Date: 2006-07-03 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlantel.livejournal.com
She is sounding a bit childish right now, but maybe she's not herself because of these nightmares (and bad nights). Hope she'll be fine!

Date: 2006-07-03 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rarity.livejournal.com
she is also hurt. emotionally, and was hurt by him physically. *shrugs* I can't say I know anyone who wouldn't sound a bit childish in those circumstances.

Date: 2006-07-03 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlantel.livejournal.com
Oh right, I totally forgot he hurt her physically :)

Date: 2006-07-03 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rarity.livejournal.com
So does that make it a bit better by slightly OOC Hermione?

Date: 2006-07-04 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snapeophile.livejournal.com
Eek--into her nightmare? I'm glad she didn't just take him back and get all sappy. He doesn't deserve it.

Date: 2006-07-04 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rarity.livejournal.com
Yes. I think you are the only one's that really agreed with me there. :D

Thanks.

Date: 2006-07-25 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writermerrin.livejournal.com
"Could it be you just refused to see me for who I was?"

This is one of the most telling lines in the whole story -- a strong reminder.

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