ext_14360 ([identity profile] amorettea.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amorphous 2007-04-01 02:34 am (UTC)

I liked it. Subtle and intriguing. One minor typo-- "dumped the rest of the continents down her throat" Either Tonks REALLY drinks or you meant "contents."
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