I would fix this one thing, because small things like this bother me "Luna, I may be dead tomorrow, because I was young and stupid… I don't – I don't want to die," he admitted in the softest voice that she had ever heard him us. us should be use, right?? sorry I'm not the greatest with checking my own stuff so I though I'd mention it :)
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Date: 2008-05-15 02:46 am (UTC)I would fix this one thing, because small things like this bother me "Luna, I may be dead tomorrow, because I was young and stupid… I don't – I don't want to die," he admitted in the softest voice that she had ever heard him us. us should be use, right?? sorry I'm not the greatest with checking my own stuff so I though I'd mention it :)
I love your draco/luna, btw..